Future perspectives

With the excellent teachers and my admired department, Tainan University of science and Technology is my first choice. And, I am interested in English since I was a child. Hence, that is why I will still choose English as my major in college. In the future, I hope my English skill can be improved. As far as I am concerned, English will have dominated the world in these years.I suppose that the curriculum in training English abilities in all aspects is just what I am avid for in Tainan University of Science and Technology.

self-evaluation

As to my personality, I am an optimistic and passionate person. No matter what difficulties I face, I deal with them actively. Despite of the troubles come to me one after another. I can overcome them with my effort. And I also bring happiness to everyone, because I like to fill the classroom with joy. Furthermore, I always meet new friends anytime and anywhere.  In the campus, not only the students knows me but also the teachers. To me, I think that bringing happiness to people is the most valuable thing in the world.
Besides, during past three years I had gotten intermediate level of GEPT test. I will work hard to pass more certifications. I also act as a coach in the bilingual basketball camp. Every Saturday afternoon, I practice English with the foreign coach. This way can improve my English oral speaking skill and I become more confidence than before. 

Family Background REVISED

My name is Gu, Yu Hong. I have five members in my family, including my parents, brother, sister and I. My father is humorous and kind. For example, he always tells some interesting stories about himself. When I have some troubles, he always gives me some suggestions which he had experienced. So, he is not only my father but also my friend. My mother is a housekeeper and she always prepares everything. She is very patient and careful. For example, no matter what I have done something wrong or forgotten to bring something. She says “Everything will be fine.”  These words will make me feel well and she is the kindest woman in the world. My parents always remind me some principles, and they change me a lot.

My brother and sister are high school students, and we get along with one another.

school life-REVISE

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages, National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). When I was junior high school student, I was interesting in English. Therefore, I determined to study English hard for entering this school. Finally, I make it!

Here in this school, not only have I took part in basketball team but also win a lot of games. For example, when I beat the four teams in a row, all of students in our department were crazy. To remember that night, we couldn’t calm down and stop shouting. Then, we were still exciting until we gained the first prize.

Moreover, I enhanced my English for these three years, and I had listened to English songs and read the English magazine everyday. I believed “No pain, no gain.” I think if I practice everyday, I can improve my English skill.  Although I couldn’t do well in my test, I would never give up because my teacher always tells me to do my best.

With my teacher's encouragement, I decided to take part in the intermediate level of GEPT. To my disappointment, I didn’t pass the listening test. From then on, I determined to enhance my listening skill. So, I listened to English magazine every night, no matter how busy I was. Finally, I passed it this May.

school life

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages, National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). When I was junior high school student, I was interesting in English. Therefore, I determined to study English hard for entering this school. Finally, I make it!

Here in this school, not only have I took part in basketball team but also win a lot of games. For example, when I beat the four teams in a row, all of students in our department were crazy. To remember that night, we couldn’t calm down and stop shouting. Then, we were still exciting until we gained the first prize.

Moreover, I enhanced my English for these three years, and I listen to English songs and read the English magazine everyday. I believed “No pain, no gain.” I think if I practice everyday, I can improve your English skill.  Although I couldn’t do well in my test, I would never give up because my teacher always tells me to do my best.

With my teacher's encouragement, I decided to take part in the intermediate level of GEPT. To my disappointment, I didn’t pass the listening test. From then on, I determined to enhance my listening skill. So, I listened to English magazine every night, no matter how busy I was. Finally, I passed it this May.

Family Background

My name is Gu, Yu Hong. I have five members in my family, including my parents, brother, sister and I. My father is humorous and kind. For example, he always tells some interesting stories about himself. When I have some troubles, he always gives me some suggestions which he had experienced. So, he is not only my father but also my friend. My mother is a housekeeper, and she always prepares everything. She is very patient and careful. For example, no matter what I have done something wrong or forgot to bring something. She says “Everything will be fine.”  These words will make me feel well. She is the kindest woman in the world. My parents always remind me some principles, and it changes me a lot.

My brother and sister are high school students, and we get along with one another.

英文自傳範例2

My name is Peter, I was born to a middle-class family, and raised in Hsinchu, Taiwan since September 6th,1978, and I spent most of my childhood and school years there.  Whatever, I have an older sister in my family.My father is retiree and my mother is technician.  When I was a student, I always studied hard at school.  Besides texts knowledge, engineering is my favorite subject, whenever studying English Language, my heart is filled with great joy and interesting.

On a special morning, I miraculously began wondering whether my actions and thoughts were set before I ever acted it out, People always said: "No pain no gain！" I agree that.  Therefore, I form a habit to reading books every day.  That is to say, my realization regarding "No pain no gain！" was typed in the script, too.  And then following the directions to accomplish my wish in the future.

Moreover, I learned how to get along with friends and myself delightedly.  I like to reading books and I have many hobbies such as collecting books, watching movies and swimming. I think that everyone should take his live seriously and cherish every minutes on the world.  As a result, it is a pity that those who commit suicides are too weak to realize the good in life.

Besides, I am really a nice and an outgoing person, and I am confident that I can be a responsible one at this moment.  Actually, I found there are many new ways and benefits in learning Language, and then I realized the importance of Language, and began to studying English diligently when I was sixteen, because its various interesting for me.  Although the learning way was quite large, I still tried hard to keep a balance between studying and extracurricular activities.

Anyway, aside from these, I am quite sure about myself and always persisting in carrying out my plan of future.  To reach my goal, I have tried my best through carefully mapping out my schedule with a hope that my life will go just as I want. This is out of the question and it may need to be adjusted to the changing circumstances though, I will hang on it.  So I hope that I could keep being a nice, an outgoing and responsible person, and try to do my best, I firmly believed that life is a perpetual surprise. Every creature was made with dignity, and all living things received their lives elegantly.

Retrospect the school days, I had studied a lot.  As for my future, it must be hard and full of mean tricks, but I am really enjoyed in the process of overcoming the obstacles and completing the tasks.  That means I will accomplish my wish step by step.  And hoping I could be the member to join the company which is about Semiconductor equipment company, to be a Engineer and to do the best of my ability, thanks. 

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英文自傳範例1

A girl born in 1982, and grew up in Taichung is me, Yi-Hui Chen , also known as Truda. There were 5 members in my well-fixed family with very enlightened and liberal parents. Even if they were divorced while I was the freshmen of the Taipei Medical University (TMU), but the relationship between families does not get any variation.
Because entering medical department is my priority, I was admitted to nursing department of TMU in 2002 and graduated in 2006. This department offered the exact and careful program. I not only had to attend the lectures of nursing, but also the clinical practices arrangement, as well as lots of the extracurricular activities caused my attentions. As know as I am an optimistic and sanguine person, so I am willing to devote the public affairs. All of these encouraged me to involve the student organization, so I acted as an activity section head for the student organization of nursing department. Learning how to organize the plans well, schedule the procedures, and manager the members efficiently.
After terminated the exchange program of the international nursing student internship USA for a month, I have worked as the clinical research assistant nurse since 2006. Furthermore, I also assisted to implement several international medical society anniversary meetings. The past couple of years have been an exceedingly busy and challenging time for my hospital office. Now I hope my academic preparations, job skills, and enthusiasm about working will have the other conversion to experience the different life and the world.

Expressing an Opinion-2 reivse

I am against using animal to be experienced. It is often argued that we should love animals. However, the animals are still used to be experienced in laboratory. First of all, I think we have to protect animals, and we should not hurt them. In addition, they all have rights of living, and we must respect them. Finally, no one can promise that the experiment will be therapeutic on human.  Above all, as the proverb goes, “Do as you would be done by”, I am in favor of not using animals in laboratory experiments.

Expressing an Opinion-1 reivse

In my opinion, I agreed with the death penalty. Because of thinking about those who were killed by killers, I prefer stand up for the death penalty to those who were against. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity. After all, people who made mistake need to accept the penalty. To sum up, while it true that International League of Human Rights clam Taiwan should abolish the death penalty; I believe that as man sows, so he shall reap.

Discussing Cause-->2 revise

I have a friend called Michael Williams who was fail his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choose the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. The other reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think there were too less types to choose. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop in no time.

Discussing Cause-->1 revise

There are many reasons why I want to work at the insurance company. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I don’t worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractive—salary. That is, if I get this job which pays me one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isn’t under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, that’s why I want to accept this job.

Best Works of The Semester-3

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

Best Works of The Semester-2

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. However, that will bring the problems for the citizens. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people will go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Best Works of The Semester-1

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons I like the former. One of the reasons of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. In addition, the former is not allowed to keep pets but the latter is okay.  However, I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur. So, I‘d like to choice the first one. The last but not the least, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. To sum, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Discussing Effects-2

If I had a chance to take a trip to English-speaking country, I would have a lot of effects from it. First of all, in the country, everyone can not speak Chinese. Therefore, you don’t have another choice but speaking English. So, I could learn English quickly. Secondly, I could chat with habitant fluently. Hence, I could prove my confidence. In addition, the experience could enhance my social ability. When I will have interview, I can answer readily. In short, if I had the chance, I would hold it carefully.

Discussion Effect-1 revise

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Discussion Effect-1

There are several effects in Action of Stanley Manufacturing which decide to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry will lead to air-pollution, voice-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic conveniently. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Contrasting-1 revised

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons that I like the former. One of the reason of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. Another, the former is not allowed to keep pets. Yet, the latter is okay. Because I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur, I‘d like to choice the first one. Others, although, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. But, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Discussing Cause-->2

I have a friend called Michael Williams who was failed his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near to a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choice the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think it is too few types to choice. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop.

Discussing Cause-->1

There are many reasons why I want to accept a job. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I don’t worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractive—salary. That is, if I get this job which pays me NT one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isn’t under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, that’s why I want to accept this job.

Expressing an Opinion-2

As the proverb goes, “Do as you would be done by”. It is often argued that we should love animals. However, we are still using animals in laboratory experiments. First, I think we have to protect animals, and we should not hurt them.   Second, they all have rights of living, and we must respect them. Finally, no one can promise that the experiment will be therapeutic on human.  Above all, I am in favor of not using animals in laboratory experiments.

Expressing an Opinion-1

In my opinion, I am in favor of the death penalty. Because of thinking about those who were killed by killers, I prefer stand up for the death penalty to those who were against. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity. After all, people who made mistake need to accept the penalty. To sum up, while it true that International League of Human Rights clam Taiwan should abolish the death penalty, I believe that as a man sows, so he shall reap

Contrasting-1

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons that I like the former. First of all, the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. But, the latter only has one and unfurnished. Second, the former is not allowed to keep pets. Yet, the latter is okay. Because I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur, I‘d like to choice the first one. Finally, although, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. But, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Comparing -2 REVISE

There are two driver’s licenses on the table. Here are some information on these licenses. Both of the licenses are located on Department of Motor Vehicles. And, one of the owners is called Stephanie; the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Freidman. But, the former has a pony tail, the other doesn't have. However, their hairs are also black. Moreover, their birthdays are on the same day. Finally, they're in the same heights, 5'3''. How coincident it is in the world.

Comparing -1 REVISE

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

HOW TO STAY HEALTHY -REVISE

Here are some methods  to show you how to stay healhy. First of all, you should eat a lot of fruits and vegetables.It's harmful to you eat too more meat. Second, you can do some exercise once a week, it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier. Third, do not staty up all night. According to a report ,if you stay up once time ,your heart and liver need to three days to renovate. Next time when you want to stay up, you should think twice. Last but not the least, this way is the most important to your healthy. You should always in a good mood everytime and everywhere. In conclusion, you can stay healthy if you follow these method.

Comparing-2

There are two driver's license on the table. Here are some imformation on these licenses. Both of the licences are located on Department of Motor Vechicles. And, one of the owner is called Stephanie,the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Fridman. But, the formal has a pony tail ,the other doesn't have. However, they are also black. Moreover, their birthday are in the same day. Finally, they're in the same hieght, 5'3''. What the coincident thing happened in the world.

My favorite Season

There are three reasons for my favorite season - Autumn. First of all, autumn is so cool and comfortable that I can walk my dog on Sunday afternoon. Therefore, my dog and I are not thirsty and sweat. Second,  it is a environmental-friendly season of all beacuse we won't  turn on the air-conditioner, that can save a lot of money. Third, we can enjoy the falling leaves under the street. Everytimes I walked on my way home, the wind blew through my face. Nothing can be better than that time. Above all, Autumn makes me happy and it is my favorite season.

Describing a person- revise

My friend got lost in the park yesterday, and hopefully anyone of you can help me with the following description. She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school student.. She is named Jenny. Besides, she looks plump, weighing about 54 kilograms.  Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150 cetemeters tall.   Moreover,she has a pair of beautiful eyes,and she doesn't wear glasses. Also, her skin looks a little black. Last but not least, she can speak English and Chinese. If you find her please contact me as fast as possible. My phone number is 0989-644-083. Thanks a lot

Comparing -1

John Adams and Thomas are important American, but they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is that they both were the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegaed to the Contioental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law and so did Thomas Jfferson. Thied, both of them were U.S president, John Adams is the second, Thomas Jefferson third. The last similariteis between the two men, , the formal was born on October 19, 1735, and the later was on April 13, 1743. But, they both died on the same day, July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

The three reasons why I like to play basketball

There are three reasons why I like to play basketball. First of all, playing basketball is a kind of sport which can cheer me up when I am upset. Because of covering with sweat is very comfortable. Second, it is a kind of manner to make a lot friend. Players who played at the park are friendly. Everyone is kind and humorous. Third, I have learned a great quantity attitude from playing basketball. As the proverb goes” Attitude is everything.” However, I think game has not lost, you have not given up. It is the best reason that I like to play the basketball very much.

Describing a Person

 My friend got lost. I would like to describe her. She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school girl. She always wears a smile and her cheek is a little fat.
 Besides, she looks plump about 54 KG.  Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150cm.   Moreover,she has a pair of beautiful eyes,and she donesn't wear glasses. Then, her skin looks a little balck. Then she can speak English and Chinese. Finally ,if you find her please contact me as fast as possible. My phone number is 0989-644-083. Thanks a lot

 

How to Stay Healthy

Here are some methods  to show you how to stay healhy. First of all, you should eat a lot of frults and vegetables. To avoid eating some pork and oil. It's harmful to your body. Second, you can do some exercise once a week, it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier. Third, do not staty up all night. According to a report ,if you stay up once time ,your heart and liver need to three days to renovate. Next time when you want to stay up, you should think twice. Finally, this way is the most important to your healthy. You should always be a good mood. In conclusion, you can stay healthy if you follow these method.

Explaining a Process-3

Liberty Bell Pavillion
When you are located on Visitor. First , you turned left for a block. Next, turned right for a block. Third, went stright for two blocks. Finally, you can find the Liberty Bell Pavillion.

Explaining a Process-2

You can do a simple experiment to prove that black is a better collector of solar energy than white. All you needs are 2 tin cans,black and white paint, room thermometer. First of all is paint the cans-on blace, one white. After that,fill the cans with water. Then, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours. Last, check the temperature of the water in the black can is higher.

Explaining a Process-1

It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure. First of all ,cover bottom of pot with small stones. Then, put two inches of soil on the top of rocks. Secondly, make a hole in the center of soil. Futhermore, drop plant into soil. Next, add soil until it almost reaches top of pot. Third, press soil down with thumbs. In end of all ,water plant.

A Miserable Day -revised1

It was a sunny day. Andy was a senior high school student. He stayed up all night long last night due to preparing for the test. The alarm was ringing, it was at 7:20. Therefore , he went to school late, because of missing the bus.Then , when he arrived the school he found that it was 8 'o clock. Hence,he was scolded by his teacher. When it was 12 o' clock ,he was running to the restaurant. To his surprise, he found his money was stolen. Therefore, he felt upset due to having nothing to eat at the noon. However, he wanted to call his mother for bringing lunch box to the school. Neverless , his cell phone ran out of eletricity. Moreover, he got a poor grade on the math test. After the school, he was confused. Why he was so unlucky today. Then , he looked at the calendar that it was Firday 13th. . No wonder he had a miserable day he had.

The Miserable Day

It was a suuny day. Andy is a senior high school student. The alarm was ringing, it was at 7.20 now. Andy began to his miserable day. In the morning , he went to school late, because he missed the bus. Then, when he arrived at the school he found that it was 9 o'clock now. So ,he was scolded by his teacher. When it was at 12o'clock he went to the restaurant that he found that his money was stolen. Therefore, he felt upset due to he have nothing to eat. However, he wanted to call his mother for bringing lunch box to the school. But , his cell phone had no power. Moreover, he got the poor grade on his math test. After the school,he was upset .Then , he looked at the calendar that it was 13th. Friday What a miserable day Andy had!

Encourage story-revised1

There is an encourage story. It was beginning from a boy who called Tom. He was invited to a sports meet in his school. He won first award and  broke the record in his school. So, his teacher wrote a reference for him to enter an excellent school.
When he entered the school, he praticed so hard that he obtained his coach's praise. However, he broke his leg when he was practicing. Furthermore, his leg must be cut off. When he took a long rest in the hospital, he knew that nothing could  beat him. In spite of having only one leg , he never gave up himself. Therefore, he practiced swimming very hard for attending the World Cup Swimming Championship. Then, his coach taught him how to swim with one leg. After hard training, he finally reached his goal. And he won first prize again, he also became a popular person in the school. To sum up, nothing is impossible. Because, everyone can reach his goal no matter what happened to him.

Encourage Story

There is an encourage story. It is beginning from a boy who called Tom. He was invited to a sports meet in his school. He won first award and he broke the record in his school. So, his teacher wrote a reference for him to enter the excellent school.

When he entered the school he practiced very hard, he obtained his coach‘s praise. However, he broke his leg when he practiced. Furthermore, his leg must be cut off. When he took a long rest in the hospital, he knew that nothing could not beat him. In spite of he had only one leg, he never gave up himself. Therefore, he practiced swimming very hard for attending the World Cup Swimming Championship. So, his coach taught him how to swim with one leg. After hard training, he finally reached his goal. And he won first prize again, he also became a popular person in the school. To sum up, nothing is impossible. Because, everyone can reach his goal no matter what happened to him.