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There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons that I like the former. One of the reason of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. Another, the former is not allowed to keep pets. Yet, the latter is okay. Because I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur, I‘d like to choice the first one. Others, although, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. But, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

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I have a friend called Michael Williams who was failed his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near to a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choice the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think it is too few types to choice. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop.

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There are many reasons why I want to accept a job. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I don’t worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractive—salary. That is, if I get this job which pays me NT one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isn’t under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, that’s why I want to accept this job.