2011年6月16日 星期四

Expressing an Opinion-2 reivse

I am against using animal to be experienced. It is often argued that we should love animals. However, the animals are still used to be experienced in laboratory. First of all, I think we have to protect animals, and we should not hurt them. In addition, they all have rights of living, and we must respect them. Finally, no one can promise that the experiment will be therapeutic on human.  Above all, as the proverb goes, “Do as you would be done by”, I am in favor of not using animals in laboratory experiments.

Expressing an Opinion-1 reivse

In my opinion, I agreed with the death penalty. Because of thinking about those who were killed by killers, I prefer stand up for the death penalty to those who were against. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity. After all, people who made mistake need to accept the penalty. To sum up, while it true that International League of Human Rights clam Taiwan should abolish the death penalty; I believe that as man sows, so he shall reap.

Discussing Cause-->2 revise

I have a friend called Michael Williams who was fail his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choose the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. The other reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think there were too less types to choose. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop in no time.

Discussing Cause-->1 revise

There are many reasons why I want to work at the insurance company. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I dont worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractivesalary. That is, if I get this job which pays me one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isnt under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, thats why I want to accept this job.

Best Works of The Semester-3

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.
  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

Best Works of The Semester-2

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. However, that will bring the problems for the citizens. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people will go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Best Works of The Semester-1

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons I like the former. One of the reasons of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. In addition, the former is not allowed to keep pets but the latter is okay.  However, I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur. So, I‘d like to choice the first one. The last but not the least, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. To sum, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Discussing Effects-2

If I had a chance to take a trip to English-speaking country, I would have a lot of effects from it. First of all, in the country, everyone can not speak Chinese. Therefore, you don’t have another choice but speaking English. So, I could learn English quickly. Secondly, I could chat with habitant fluently. Hence, I could prove my confidence. In addition, the experience could enhance my social ability. When I will have interview, I can answer readily. In short, if I had the chance, I would hold it carefully.

2011年6月15日 星期三

Discussion Effect-1 revise

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.