Comparing -2 REVISE

There are two driver’s licenses on the table. Here are some information on these licenses. Both of the licenses are located on Department of Motor Vehicles. And, one of the owners is called Stephanie; the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Freidman. But, the former has a pony tail, the other doesn't have. However, their hairs are also black. Moreover, their birthdays are on the same day. Finally, they're in the same heights, 5'3''. How coincident it is in the world.

Comparing -1 REVISE

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.