A Miserable Day -revised1

It was a sunny day. Andy was a senior high school student. He stayed up all night long last night due to preparing for the test. The alarm was ringing, it was at 7:20. Therefore , he went to school late, because of missing the bus.Then , when he arrived the school he found that it was 8 'o clock. Hence,he was scolded by his teacher. When it was 12 o' clock ,he was running to the restaurant. To his surprise, he found his money was stolen. Therefore, he felt upset due to having nothing to eat at the noon. However, he wanted to call his mother for bringing lunch box to the school. Neverless , his cell phone ran out of eletricity. Moreover, he got a poor grade on the math test. After the school, he was confused. Why he was so unlucky today. Then , he looked at the calendar that it was Firday 13th. . No wonder he had a miserable day he had.

The Miserable Day

It was a suuny day. Andy is a senior high school student. The alarm was ringing, it was at 7.20 now. Andy began to his miserable day. In the morning , he went to school late, because he missed the bus. Then, when he arrived at the school he found that it was 9 o'clock now. So ,he was scolded by his teacher. When it was at 12o'clock he went to the restaurant that he found that his money was stolen. Therefore, he felt upset due to he have nothing to eat. However, he wanted to call his mother for bringing lunch box to the school. But , his cell phone had no power. Moreover, he got the poor grade on his math test. After the school,he was upset .Then , he looked at the calendar that it was 13th. Friday What a miserable day Andy had!