2011年4月6日 星期三

How to Stay Healthy

Here are some methods  to show you how to stay healhy. First of all, you should eat a lot of frults and vegetables. To avoid eating some pork and oil. It's harmful to your body. Second, you can do some exercise once a week, it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier. Third, do not staty up all night. According to a report ,if you stay up once time ,your heart and liver need to three days to renovate. Next time when you want to stay up, you should think twice. Finally, this way is the most important to your healthy. You should always be a good mood. In conclusion, you can stay healthy if you follow these method.

6 則留言:

  1. To avoid eating some pork and oil.
    避免吃肉跟油? 跟下面那句接起來怪怪的

    *staty up = stay
    *finally 那句可以用 last but not the least來寫
    *be a good mood 應該是 in a good mood
    還有你的結論句太多了

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  2. 文法跟錯字不少你自己知道就好
    其他了話
    好像把焦點放在減重上面了
    太瘦可能也不太好吧?

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  3. frults fruits

    you can do some exercise once a week, it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier

    it's 後面+Ving 然後 兩句用句號分開比較好吧

    liver need to three days to renovate need 跟three days 不用to吧

    once time 改成 one time 或 once吧?

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  4. 針對pork這點還蠻有歧視意味的!!!

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  5. it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier
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    if you stay up once time
    one time就好

    your heart and liver need to three days to renovate
    你自己好好想一想 最後一字也可以用最近教的 restore

    Next time when you want to stay up
    句意很怪 很少人會想自己熬夜 通常是逼不得已
    可以打 you are about to stay up

    this way is the most important to your healthy
    錯字

    You should always be a good mood.
    這不是常在教 要打 be in a good mood

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  6. healhy...healthy

    frults...fruits

    it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier...it not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier

    Second, you can do some exercise once a week...怎麼會一週一次呢?不是一週三次嗎?

    if you stay up once time ...one time嗎?once怪怪的


    You should always be a good mood....You should always be in a good mood

    staty...stay

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