My friend got lost. I would like to describe her. She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school girl. She always wears a smile and her cheek is a little fat.
Besides, she looks plump about 54 KG. Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150cm. Moreover,she has a pair of beautiful eyes,and she donesn't wear glasses. Then, her skin looks a little balck. Then she can speak English and Chinese. Finally ,if you find her please contact me as fast as possible. My phone number is 0989-644-083. Thanks a lot
She always wears a smile .她GOT LOST 了 還會微笑嗎??XDDD
回覆刪除balck...black
(如果我打算幫你找...我擔心找不到因為你描寫的太普遍了
would like to describe her 為什麼要用would like?
回覆刪除然後用看的看不出五十四公斤吧
she donesn't wear glasses
你這個是想don't 還是doesn't?
her skin looks a little balck ->black
finally 應該是最後一個列點 所以也是有關他的特徵 所以應該再多加一條 然後聯絡你的那句就放到結論那裡吧
balck 瞎毀阿
回覆刪除本想稱讚一下這篇沒有白吃錯誤的
I would like to describe her
這句...更奇怪
還 你想要勒
I would like to describe her
回覆刪除也太奇怪!
還有他是一個高中生 用girl也太奇怪
單字錯很多有一點難懂
回覆刪除手機打出來並不會多加分數!
一開始用完成式比較好!
回覆刪除膚色用dark應該比較好