There are three reasons why I like to play basketball. First of all, playing basketball is a kind of sport which can cheer me up when I am upset. Because of covering with sweat is very comfortable. Second, it is a kind of manner to make a lot friend. Players who played at the park are friendly. Everyone is kind and humorous. Third, I have learned a great quantity attitude from playing basketball. As the proverb goes” Attitude is everything.” However, I think game has not lost, you have not given up. It is the best reason that I like to play the basketball very much.
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Everyone is kind and humorous....的KIND 其實可以，只是覺得前面有很多a kind of 所以把這裡的KIND改成nice也不會扭曲掉你的意思
回覆刪除a great quantity attitude ...是怎樣大量的態度呢?
you have not given up....原本的意思是"你不能放棄"的意思吧..可是覺得這句話翻起來怪怪的...還有為什麼要用完成式..?
Because of covering with sweat is very comfortable
回覆刪除打 it is comfortable because of ~ 會比較好一點
然後被汗蓋過去有點誇張喔!
ｖｉｋｃｙ都說完了 我還要說什麼呢？
回覆刪除a lot +of friend S
回覆刪除後面那句超怪異