2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing -1
John Adams and Thomas are important American, but they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is that they both were the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegaed to the Contioental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law and so did Thomas Jfferson. Thied, both of them were U.S president, John Adams is the second, Thomas Jefferson third. The last similariteis between the two men, , the formal was born on October 19, 1735, and the later was on April 13, 1743. But, they both died on the same day, July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.
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第一句的American沒+S
回覆刪除為什麼要用BUT 不用 AND
both的位置不對..
回覆刪除單複數問題很多
字拼錯
一個句子沒放連接詞就有兩個動詞還有句子沒有動詞的
第一句的but是怎麼回事
回覆刪除Thied 這是哪個字??
Thied, both of them were U.S president, John Adams is the second, Thomas Jefferson third.
毫無文法可以言 沒有連接詞 最後更誇張 沒有動詞
The last similariteis 這是什麼?? 幹麻用複數
that was so coincident for the two people.
這是什麼?
American....Americans
回覆刪除they both were ..they were both
Thied...Third
later ..latter
Thied, both of them were U.S president, John Adams is the second, Thomas Jefferson third....想表達的意思很好可是整句需要修改一下哦:D
both were the important person => were both the important people
回覆刪除Thied,=>Third
Thied, both of them were U.S president, John Adams is the second, Thomas Jefferson third.
後面有點多餘