2011年4月27日 星期三
My favorite Season
There are three reasons for my favorite season - Autumn. First of all, autumn is so cool and comfortable that I can walk my dog on Sunday afternoon. Therefore, my dog and I are not thirsty and sweat. Second, it is a environmental-friendly season of all beacuse we won't turn on the air-conditioner, that can save a lot of money. Third, we can enjoy the falling leaves under the street. Everytimes I walked on my way home, the wind blew through my face. Nothing can be better than that time. Above all, Autumn makes me happy and it is my favorite season.
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my dog and I are not thirsty and sweat
回覆刪除是在說你跟你家的狗同等級嗎?
不用特別加上你家的狗吧
we can enjoy the falling leaves under the street
什麼意思?
so that 太怎樣以致於怎樣
回覆刪除意思是說只有秋天可以溜狗嗎 春夏冬就不能嗎哈哈
Everytimes I walked on my way home, the wind blew through my face.
這句的重點是? 純敘述嗎 沒有講到原因
可以多想一些SUPPORTING IDEAS
回覆刪除There are three reasons for my favorite season 怪
回覆刪除冬天也不用air conditioner 更不用fans 不是更環保