2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing-2
There are two driver's license on the table. Here are some imformation on these licenses. Both of the licences are located on Department of Motor Vechicles. And, one of the owner is called Stephanie,the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Fridman. But, the formal has a pony tail ,the other doesn't have. However, they are also black. Moreover, their birthday are in the same day. Finally, they're in the same hieght, 5'3''. What the coincident thing happened in the world.
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license 可數
回覆刪除Here are some imformation on these licenses.
好像不是用on?
然後下面太亂了自己聽別人講
字依然拼錯.....
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句法很多重複
driver's license...drivers'licenses
回覆刪除in the same day... on the same day
可數的名詞沒加S
回覆刪除不可數的你用are
最後一句文法錯誤喔
可數的名詞沒加S
回覆刪除不可數的你用are
最後依據的文法錯誤