2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an Opinion-1

In my opinion, I am in favor of the death penalty. Because of thinking about those who were killed by killers, I prefer stand up for the death penalty to those who were against. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity. After all, people who made mistake need to accept the penalty. To sum up, while it true that International League of Human Rights clam Taiwan should abolish the death penalty, I believe that as a man sows, so he shall reap

5 則留言:

  1. I am in favor of the death penalty
    這句會讓人覺得你很恐怖
    應該是贊成死刑 不是喜愛死刑

    單複數請注意
    文法也要注意 ex: prefer後面要動詞ing

    為什麼會有一分耕耘一分收穫 =))

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  2. 說實在同學
    我真的看不懂你的文章...
    然後最後那句你是想表達說
    有因就有果嗎?

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  3. 你說你都有打文章但是我覺得你有打跟沒打差不多

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  4. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity

    看不董

    it true that 希望你是忘記加is

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