2011年4月27日 星期三

Describing a person- revise

My friend got lost in the park yesterday, and hopefully anyone of you can help me with the following description. She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school student.. She is named Jenny. Besides, she looks plump, weighing about 54 kilograms.  Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150 cetemeters tall.   Moreover,she has a pair of beautiful eyes,and she doesn't wear glasses. Also, her skin looks a little black. Last but not least, she can speak English and Chinese. If you find her please contact me as fast as possible. My phone number is 0989-644-083. Thanks a lot
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  1. 金龍2011年5月4日 晚上11:19

    1.My friend got lost. I will describe her.
    -->My friend got lost in the park yesterday, and hopefully anyone of you can help me with the following description.

    2.She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school.
    -->She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school student.

    3.Her name called Jenny.
    -->She is named Jenny.

    4.Besides, she looks plump about 54 KG.
    -->Besides, she looks plump, weighing about 54 kilograms.

    5.Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150cm.
    -->Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150 cetemeters tall.

    6.Then she can speak English and Chinese.
    -->Last but not least, she can speak English and Chinese.

    Revise it again!!!

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