I have a friend called Michael Williams who was failed his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near to a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choice the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think it is too few types to choice. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop.
FAIL不用被動
回覆刪除NEAR甭+TO
choice是動詞
it is too few?
there was吧?
你才說有兩個原因
回覆刪除所以後面不能用all
然後時態
choice改choose
another 應該改成the other
who was failed his disc shop為啥被動?還是把
回覆刪除failed當形容詞了? 那也要介係詞吧?
that the shore is located near to a shopping center that has two large music stores
我們是在講海岸還是music store
So, I think it is too few types to choice
few 後面還能加types嗎?
choired 你是想打chosen吧?
customs 給海關選嗎? customers?
According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop.
這裡的according to the two reasons above 不知道有什麼意義
two reasons 怎嚜用ALL
回覆刪除there had 沒有這種句型
choice 應該是 choose
choice ...choose
回覆刪除there is/are 怎麼有there had@@