2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an Opinion-2

As the proverb goes, “Do as you would be done by”. It is often argued that we should love animals. However, we are still using animals in laboratory experiments. First, I think we have to protect animals, and we should not hurt them.   Second, they all have rights of living, and we must respect them. Finally, no one can promise that the experiment will be therapeutic on human.  Above all, I am in favor of not using animals in laboratory experiments.

5 則留言:

  1. in favor of很愛亂用
    然後你一開始就應該提出說你反對

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  2. 第三句 雖然懂你意思
    但我覺得你要改一下
    直翻的意思 在實驗室裡使用動物= =
    應該要改"以動物作實驗"

    你的論點要用多一點例子去支持他阿
    不然讀者不會認同你

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  3. 要寫為什麼吧感覺理由不夠多

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  4. 你的字型有點亂

    諺語好多= =

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