My name is Gu, Yu Hong. I have five members in my family, including my parents, brother, sister and I. My father is humorous and kind. For example, he always tells some interesting stories about himself. When I have some troubles, he always gives me some suggestions which he had experienced. So, he is not only my father but also my friend. My mother is a housekeeper, and she always prepares everything. She is very patient and careful. For example, no matter what I have done something wrong or forgot to bring something. She says “Everything will be fine.” These words will make me feel well. She is the kindest woman in the world. My parents always remind me some principles, and it changes me a lot.
My brother and sister are high school students, and we get along with one another.
很好哦^^
回覆刪除只是結論???XD
可以多寫點你改變了什麼!
回覆刪除對你的影響
父母對你的影響都有寫到 但是弟弟和妹妹呢?
回覆刪除結論呢?
what I have done something wrong or forgot to bring something. 你的have 都不愛用動詞p.p謝謝 forgoten
回覆刪除She is the kindest woman in the world很好這是所謂的不連貫句子
some principles, and it changes me a lot. it改they