Discussing Cause-->1 revise

There are many reasons why I want to work at the insurance company. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I don’t worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractive—salary. That is, if I get this job which pays me one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isn’t under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, that’s why I want to accept this job.

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John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

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There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. However, that will bring the problems for the citizens. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people will go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

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There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons I like the former. One of the reasons of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. In addition, the former is not allowed to keep pets but the latter is okay.  However, I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur. So, I‘d like to choice the first one. The last but not the least, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. To sum, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Discussing Effects-2

If I had a chance to take a trip to English-speaking country, I would have a lot of effects from it. First of all, in the country, everyone can not speak Chinese. Therefore, you don’t have another choice but speaking English. So, I could learn English quickly. Secondly, I could chat with habitant fluently. Hence, I could prove my confidence. In addition, the experience could enhance my social ability. When I will have interview, I can answer readily. In short, if I had the chance, I would hold it carefully.

Discussion Effect-1 revise

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Discussion Effect-1

There are several effects in Action of Stanley Manufacturing which decide to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry will lead to air-pollution, voice-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic conveniently. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.