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I have a friend called Michael Williams who was failed his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near to a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choice the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think it is too few types to choice. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop.

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There are many reasons why I want to accept a job. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I don’t worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractive—salary. That is, if I get this job which pays me NT one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isn’t under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, that’s why I want to accept this job.

Expressing an Opinion-2

As the proverb goes, “Do as you would be done by”. It is often argued that we should love animals. However, we are still using animals in laboratory experiments. First, I think we have to protect animals, and we should not hurt them.   Second, they all have rights of living, and we must respect them. Finally, no one can promise that the experiment will be therapeutic on human.  Above all, I am in favor of not using animals in laboratory experiments.

Expressing an Opinion-1

In my opinion, I am in favor of the death penalty. Because of thinking about those who were killed by killers, I prefer stand up for the death penalty to those who were against. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity. After all, people who made mistake need to accept the penalty. To sum up, while it true that International League of Human Rights clam Taiwan should abolish the death penalty, I believe that as a man sows, so he shall reap

Contrasting-1

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons that I like the former. First of all, the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. But, the latter only has one and unfurnished. Second, the former is not allowed to keep pets. Yet, the latter is okay. Because I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur, I‘d like to choice the first one. Finally, although, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. But, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Comparing -2 REVISE

There are two driver’s licenses on the table. Here are some information on these licenses. Both of the licenses are located on Department of Motor Vehicles. And, one of the owners is called Stephanie; the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Freidman. But, the former has a pony tail, the other doesn't have. However, their hairs are also black. Moreover, their birthdays are on the same day. Finally, they're in the same heights, 5'3''. How coincident it is in the world.

Comparing -1 REVISE

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.