Contrasting-1

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons that I like the former. First of all, the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. But, the latter only has one and unfurnished. Second, the former is not allowed to keep pets. Yet, the latter is okay. Because I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur, I‘d like to choice the first one. Finally, although, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. But, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Comparing -2 REVISE

There are two driver’s licenses on the table. Here are some information on these licenses. Both of the licenses are located on Department of Motor Vehicles. And, one of the owners is called Stephanie; the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Freidman. But, the former has a pony tail, the other doesn't have. However, their hairs are also black. Moreover, their birthdays are on the same day. Finally, they're in the same heights, 5'3''. How coincident it is in the world.

Comparing -1 REVISE

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

HOW TO STAY HEALTHY -REVISE

Here are some methods  to show you how to stay healhy. First of all, you should eat a lot of fruits and vegetables.It's harmful to you eat too more meat. Second, you can do some exercise once a week, it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier. Third, do not staty up all night. According to a report ,if you stay up once time ,your heart and liver need to three days to renovate. Next time when you want to stay up, you should think twice. Last but not the least, this way is the most important to your healthy. You should always in a good mood everytime and everywhere. In conclusion, you can stay healthy if you follow these method.

Comparing-2

There are two driver's license on the table. Here are some imformation on these licenses. Both of the licences are located on Department of Motor Vechicles. And, one of the owner is called Stephanie,the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Fridman. But, the formal has a pony tail ,the other doesn't have. However, they are also black. Moreover, their birthday are in the same day. Finally, they're in the same hieght, 5'3''. What the coincident thing happened in the world.

My favorite Season

There are three reasons for my favorite season - Autumn. First of all, autumn is so cool and comfortable that I can walk my dog on Sunday afternoon. Therefore, my dog and I are not thirsty and sweat. Second,  it is a environmental-friendly season of all beacuse we won't  turn on the air-conditioner, that can save a lot of money. Third, we can enjoy the falling leaves under the street. Everytimes I walked on my way home, the wind blew through my face. Nothing can be better than that time. Above all, Autumn makes me happy and it is my favorite season.

Describing a person- revise

My friend got lost in the park yesterday, and hopefully anyone of you can help me with the following description. She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school student.. She is named Jenny. Besides, she looks plump, weighing about 54 kilograms.  Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150 cetemeters tall.   Moreover,she has a pair of beautiful eyes,and she doesn't wear glasses. Also, her skin looks a little black. Last but not least, she can speak English and Chinese. If you find her please contact me as fast as possible. My phone number is 0989-644-083. Thanks a lot