Comparing -1 REVISE

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

HOW TO STAY HEALTHY -REVISE

Here are some methods  to show you how to stay healhy. First of all, you should eat a lot of fruits and vegetables.It's harmful to you eat too more meat. Second, you can do some exercise once a week, it's not only keep your figure slender but also make your mood happier. Third, do not staty up all night. According to a report ,if you stay up once time ,your heart and liver need to three days to renovate. Next time when you want to stay up, you should think twice. Last but not the least, this way is the most important to your healthy. You should always in a good mood everytime and everywhere. In conclusion, you can stay healthy if you follow these method.

Comparing-2

There are two driver's license on the table. Here are some imformation on these licenses. Both of the licences are located on Department of Motor Vechicles. And, one of the owner is called Stephanie,the other is called Ann Friedman. Stephanie Brooks has a pair of brown eyes, and so does Ann Fridman. But, the formal has a pony tail ,the other doesn't have. However, they are also black. Moreover, their birthday are in the same day. Finally, they're in the same hieght, 5'3''. What the coincident thing happened in the world.

My favorite Season

There are three reasons for my favorite season - Autumn. First of all, autumn is so cool and comfortable that I can walk my dog on Sunday afternoon. Therefore, my dog and I are not thirsty and sweat. Second,  it is a environmental-friendly season of all beacuse we won't  turn on the air-conditioner, that can save a lot of money. Third, we can enjoy the falling leaves under the street. Everytimes I walked on my way home, the wind blew through my face. Nothing can be better than that time. Above all, Autumn makes me happy and it is my favorite season.

Describing a person- revise

My friend got lost in the park yesterday, and hopefully anyone of you can help me with the following description. She is a seventeen-year-old senior high school student.. She is named Jenny. Besides, she looks plump, weighing about 54 kilograms.  Nevertheless, she is medium in stature about 150 cetemeters tall.   Moreover,she has a pair of beautiful eyes,and she doesn't wear glasses. Also, her skin looks a little black. Last but not least, she can speak English and Chinese. If you find her please contact me as fast as possible. My phone number is 0989-644-083. Thanks a lot

Comparing -1

John Adams and Thomas are important American, but they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is that they both were the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegaed to the Contioental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law and so did Thomas Jfferson. Thied, both of them were U.S president, John Adams is the second, Thomas Jefferson third. The last similariteis between the two men, , the formal was born on October 19, 1735, and the later was on April 13, 1743. But, they both died on the same day, July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

The three reasons why I like to play basketball

There are three reasons why I like to play basketball. First of all, playing basketball is a kind of sport which can cheer me up when I am upset. Because of covering with sweat is very comfortable. Second, it is a kind of manner to make a lot friend. Players who played at the park are friendly. Everyone is kind and humorous. Third, I have learned a great quantity attitude from playing basketball. As the proverb goes” Attitude is everything.” However, I think game has not lost, you have not given up. It is the best reason that I like to play the basketball very much.