Future perspectives

With the excellent teachers and my admired department, Tainan University of science and Technology is my first choice. And, I am interested in English since I was a child. Hence, that is why I will still choose English as my major in college. In the future, I hope my English skill can be improved. As far as I am concerned, English will have dominated the world in these years.I suppose that the curriculum in training English abilities in all aspects is just what I am avid for in Tainan University of Science and Technology.

self-evaluation

As to my personality, I am an optimistic and passionate person. No matter what difficulties I face, I deal with them actively. Despite of the troubles come to me one after another. I can overcome them with my effort. And I also bring happiness to everyone, because I like to fill the classroom with joy. Furthermore, I always meet new friends anytime and anywhere.  In the campus, not only the students knows me but also the teachers. To me, I think that bringing happiness to people is the most valuable thing in the world.
Besides, during past three years I had gotten intermediate level of GEPT test. I will work hard to pass more certifications. I also act as a coach in the bilingual basketball camp. Every Saturday afternoon, I practice English with the foreign coach. This way can improve my English oral speaking skill and I become more confidence than before. 

Family Background REVISED

My name is Gu, Yu Hong. I have five members in my family, including my parents, brother, sister and I. My father is humorous and kind. For example, he always tells some interesting stories about himself. When I have some troubles, he always gives me some suggestions which he had experienced. So, he is not only my father but also my friend. My mother is a housekeeper and she always prepares everything. She is very patient and careful. For example, no matter what I have done something wrong or forgotten to bring something. She says “Everything will be fine.”  These words will make me feel well and she is the kindest woman in the world. My parents always remind me some principles, and they change me a lot.

My brother and sister are high school students, and we get along with one another.

school life-REVISE

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages, National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). When I was junior high school student, I was interesting in English. Therefore, I determined to study English hard for entering this school. Finally, I make it!

Here in this school, not only have I took part in basketball team but also win a lot of games. For example, when I beat the four teams in a row, all of students in our department were crazy. To remember that night, we couldn’t calm down and stop shouting. Then, we were still exciting until we gained the first prize.

Moreover, I enhanced my English for these three years, and I had listened to English songs and read the English magazine everyday. I believed “No pain, no gain.” I think if I practice everyday, I can improve my English skill.  Although I couldn’t do well in my test, I would never give up because my teacher always tells me to do my best.

With my teacher's encouragement, I decided to take part in the intermediate level of GEPT. To my disappointment, I didn’t pass the listening test. From then on, I determined to enhance my listening skill. So, I listened to English magazine every night, no matter how busy I was. Finally, I passed it this May.

school life

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages, National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). When I was junior high school student, I was interesting in English. Therefore, I determined to study English hard for entering this school. Finally, I make it!

Here in this school, not only have I took part in basketball team but also win a lot of games. For example, when I beat the four teams in a row, all of students in our department were crazy. To remember that night, we couldn’t calm down and stop shouting. Then, we were still exciting until we gained the first prize.

Moreover, I enhanced my English for these three years, and I listen to English songs and read the English magazine everyday. I believed “No pain, no gain.” I think if I practice everyday, I can improve your English skill.  Although I couldn’t do well in my test, I would never give up because my teacher always tells me to do my best.

With my teacher's encouragement, I decided to take part in the intermediate level of GEPT. To my disappointment, I didn’t pass the listening test. From then on, I determined to enhance my listening skill. So, I listened to English magazine every night, no matter how busy I was. Finally, I passed it this May.

Family Background

My name is Gu, Yu Hong. I have five members in my family, including my parents, brother, sister and I. My father is humorous and kind. For example, he always tells some interesting stories about himself. When I have some troubles, he always gives me some suggestions which he had experienced. So, he is not only my father but also my friend. My mother is a housekeeper, and she always prepares everything. She is very patient and careful. For example, no matter what I have done something wrong or forgot to bring something. She says “Everything will be fine.”  These words will make me feel well. She is the kindest woman in the world. My parents always remind me some principles, and it changes me a lot.

My brother and sister are high school students, and we get along with one another.

英文自傳範例2

My name is Peter, I was born to a middle-class family, and raised in Hsinchu, Taiwan since September 6th,1978, and I spent most of my childhood and school years there.  Whatever, I have an older sister in my family.My father is retiree and my mother is technician.  When I was a student, I always studied hard at school.  Besides texts knowledge, engineering is my favorite subject, whenever studying English Language, my heart is filled with great joy and interesting.

On a special morning, I miraculously began wondering whether my actions and thoughts were set before I ever acted it out, People always said: "No pain no gain！" I agree that.  Therefore, I form a habit to reading books every day.  That is to say, my realization regarding "No pain no gain！" was typed in the script, too.  And then following the directions to accomplish my wish in the future.

Moreover, I learned how to get along with friends and myself delightedly.  I like to reading books and I have many hobbies such as collecting books, watching movies and swimming. I think that everyone should take his live seriously and cherish every minutes on the world.  As a result, it is a pity that those who commit suicides are too weak to realize the good in life.

Besides, I am really a nice and an outgoing person, and I am confident that I can be a responsible one at this moment.  Actually, I found there are many new ways and benefits in learning Language, and then I realized the importance of Language, and began to studying English diligently when I was sixteen, because its various interesting for me.  Although the learning way was quite large, I still tried hard to keep a balance between studying and extracurricular activities.

Anyway, aside from these, I am quite sure about myself and always persisting in carrying out my plan of future.  To reach my goal, I have tried my best through carefully mapping out my schedule with a hope that my life will go just as I want. This is out of the question and it may need to be adjusted to the changing circumstances though, I will hang on it.  So I hope that I could keep being a nice, an outgoing and responsible person, and try to do my best, I firmly believed that life is a perpetual surprise. Every creature was made with dignity, and all living things received their lives elegantly.

Retrospect the school days, I had studied a lot.  As for my future, it must be hard and full of mean tricks, but I am really enjoyed in the process of overcoming the obstacles and completing the tasks.  That means I will accomplish my wish step by step.  And hoping I could be the member to join the company which is about Semiconductor equipment company, to be a Engineer and to do the best of my ability, thanks. 

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英文自傳範例1

A girl born in 1982, and grew up in Taichung is me, Yi-Hui Chen , also known as Truda. There were 5 members in my well-fixed family with very enlightened and liberal parents. Even if they were divorced while I was the freshmen of the Taipei Medical University (TMU), but the relationship between families does not get any variation.
Because entering medical department is my priority, I was admitted to nursing department of TMU in 2002 and graduated in 2006. This department offered the exact and careful program. I not only had to attend the lectures of nursing, but also the clinical practices arrangement, as well as lots of the extracurricular activities caused my attentions. As know as I am an optimistic and sanguine person, so I am willing to devote the public affairs. All of these encouraged me to involve the student organization, so I acted as an activity section head for the student organization of nursing department. Learning how to organize the plans well, schedule the procedures, and manager the members efficiently.
After terminated the exchange program of the international nursing student internship USA for a month, I have worked as the clinical research assistant nurse since 2006. Furthermore, I also assisted to implement several international medical society anniversary meetings. The past couple of years have been an exceedingly busy and challenging time for my hospital office. Now I hope my academic preparations, job skills, and enthusiasm about working will have the other conversion to experience the different life and the world.

Expressing an Opinion-2 reivse

I am against using animal to be experienced. It is often argued that we should love animals. However, the animals are still used to be experienced in laboratory. First of all, I think we have to protect animals, and we should not hurt them. In addition, they all have rights of living, and we must respect them. Finally, no one can promise that the experiment will be therapeutic on human.  Above all, as the proverb goes, “Do as you would be done by”, I am in favor of not using animals in laboratory experiments.

Expressing an Opinion-1 reivse

In my opinion, I agreed with the death penalty. Because of thinking about those who were killed by killers, I prefer stand up for the death penalty to those who were against. Despite the fact that the killers are cold and cruel, people maintain that it’s not humanity. After all, people who made mistake need to accept the penalty. To sum up, while it true that International League of Human Rights clam Taiwan should abolish the death penalty; I believe that as man sows, so he shall reap.

Discussing Cause-->2 revise

I have a friend called Michael Williams who was fail his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choose the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. The other reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think there were too less types to choose. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop in no time.

Discussing Cause-->1 revise

There are many reasons why I want to work at the insurance company. I think the job is the best choice. Frankly speaking, the distance of the workplace is one of the reasons. For example, if I drive car for one hour, my fuel price will be the big problem to me. Then, another reason is that the job needs no experience. Consequently, I don’t worry to get with it. The other reason is the most important but attractive—salary. That is, if I get this job which pays me one hundred thousand dollars a month, I could have a car and a house by loaning from the bank. As a result, it isn’t under any pressure for me to do everything what I want to do. Above all, that’s why I want to accept this job.

Best Works of The Semester-3

John Adams and Thomas are important Americans, and they were similar in many ways. For the first thing is they were both the important person in the American Revolution. And, they also delegated to the Continental Congress. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, both of the men are American presidents. John Adams was the second one; however, Thomas Jefferson was the third one.

  The last similarity between the two men, the former was born on October 19, 1735, and the latter was born on April 13, 1743. Moreover, they even died on July 4, 1826. Above all, that was so coincident for the two people.

Best Works of The Semester-2

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. However, that will bring the problems for the citizens. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people will go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Best Works of The Semester-1

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons I like the former. One of the reasons of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. In addition, the former is not allowed to keep pets but the latter is okay.  However, I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur. So, I‘d like to choice the first one. The last but not the least, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. To sum, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Discussing Effects-2

If I had a chance to take a trip to English-speaking country, I would have a lot of effects from it. First of all, in the country, everyone can not speak Chinese. Therefore, you don’t have another choice but speaking English. So, I could learn English quickly. Secondly, I could chat with habitant fluently. Hence, I could prove my confidence. In addition, the experience could enhance my social ability. When I will have interview, I can answer readily. In short, if I had the chance, I would hold it carefully.

Discussion Effect-1 revise

There are several effects on Acton that Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry, it will lead to air-pollution, noise-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic convenience. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Discussion Effect-1

There are several effects in Action of Stanley Manufacturing which decide to open a large factory. First of all, Stanley Manufacturing may bring a great deal of jobs for the citizens who lived in this town. It is a positive effect on the town. On the other hand, some people may worry about the pollution that the factory brings. Because of the development of industry will lead to air-pollution, voice-pollution and water-pollution. Therefore, it is the negative effect for the town. Then, the other positive effect that the factory brings is traffic conveniently. For example, a lot of people go the factory by public transportation, so the government will set up more bus stops. According these effects, I think the factory brings not only convenient but also the environment pollution.

Contrasting-1 revised

There are two choices of selection houses on the website. Between two choices, I prefer to Fairfax Apartment than Campus APTS. There are some reasons that I like the former. One of the reason of all is that the former has 2 large rooms and air conditioner. Yet, the latter only has one and unfurnished. Another, the former is not allowed to keep pets. Yet, the latter is okay. Because I ‘m allergic to animal’s fur, I‘d like to choice the first one. Others, although, the rest of the former is higher than the latter. But, I think it’s worthy of living for the living quality is better.

Discussing Cause-->2

I have a friend called Michael Williams who was failed his disc shop. Consequently, I have two reasons to explain why Mr. Williams closed his disc shop. The biggest problem of all the reasons is that the shore is located near to a shopping center that has two large music stores. For example, if there had big store and small store, I would choice the big one at the first. That is, the small one will be eliminated from the choice. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. So, I think it is too few types to choice. However, a successful CD shop will be opened at a good place and have a variety of type to be choired by customs. According to the two reasons above, that is why Mr. Williams closed his shop.